March 24th, 2007

self-smiling

Haiku re haiku

Hi!

I was up in the middle of the night for no good reason, and this is one of the sillier things I did:

the haiku form
limits expression, so allows
more potent ideas

five, seven, five, each
one has to convey such weight
since there are so few

word selection means
more here than elsewhere, except
perhaps a tombstone
Let me know what you think.

Cheers! generalist

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